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  • May 14th.

  • Today is Tuesday, May 14th.
    • Today the classes will start at 9.30 o'clock.
    • Since last weekend I started to watch a new serie by samurais, I like it, I really like it, for that, yesterday my girlfriend I gave me a samurai hat.
    • Now it is on the display, When Xiomy game me the hat, she said to me: "do you feel like throwing yourself to give me a hug", I ran to her and gave a kiss and I put on my head the hat, and I put my head held high, and I started to take a photos all day, When my mommy called us to have the lunch, my little brother said to me: "and the sword, where is?", and I said to Xiomy "it's true", but I love my hat, I love and I'm going to the school wearing it.
    • A day early, in Colombian It was the mother's day, and I did the presents for my mommy in the early morning, I did the breakfast to her, I bought the necklace, the necklace is made of silver, is very beautifull.
    • Now when I'm writting it, my mommy passed beside me and frown me, like to said to me: "take a shower and go to school", well I go to school now.
    • But I need to do a deal with my mommy for a permission, I shall to said to my mommy: "mommy, Might I go to pass the night with my girlfriend?" then, I go to said that to my mommy.

МОЛИМО, ПОМОЗИТЕ ИСПРАВИТИ СВАКУ РЕЧЕНИЦУ! - English

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    • Now it is on the display, When Xiomy game me the hat, she said to me: "do you feel like throwing yourself to give me a hug", I ran to her and gave a kiss and I put on my head the hat, and I put my head held high, and I started to take a photos all day, When my mommy called us to have the lunch, my little brother said to me: "and the sword, where is?", and I said to Xiomy "it's true", but I love my hat, I love and I'm going to the school wearing it.
      Сада гласајте !
    • Now it is on the display, When XiomyWhen Xiomy, my girlfriend, first gamve me the hat, she said to me:, "do you feel like throwing yourself to givegiving me a hug",?". I ran to her and gave her a kiss and. I put on my head the hat, on and I putheld my head held high, and I started to take a photo. I took pictures all day, . When my mommy called us to have the lunch, my little brother said toasked me:, "and the sword, where is?", and I said to Xiomy "it's true", but I love my hat, it?". I turned to Xiomy and jokingly asked her, "it's true, where's my sword?" even though I did not care much for it. I love my hat and I'm going to the school wearing itwear it to school.
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      Сада гласајте !
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    • A day early, in Colombian It was the mother's day, and I did the presents for my mommy in the early morning, I did the breakfast to her, I bought the necklace, the necklace is made of silver, is very beautifull.
      Сада гласајте !
    • A day early,Yesterday was Mother's Day in Coloumbian. It was the mother's day, and I did the presents for my mommy in the early morning, I did the breakfast to her, I bought the necklace, the necklace is made of silver, is very beautifull. bought a beautiful silver necklace for my mother. Early that morning, I gave her my present and cooked breakfast for her.
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    • But I need to do a deal with my mommy for a permission, I shall to said to my mommy: "mommy, Might I go to pass the night with my girlfriend?" then, I go to said that to my mommy.
      Сада гласајте !
    • But I need to do a deal with my mommy for a permission, I shall to said to my mommy:I want to spend some time with my girlfriend, but I need permission from my mother first. I think I shall ask her, "mMommy, Might I go to passcan I spend the night with my girlfriend?" then, I go to said that to my mommy.
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