添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

fittiからのテキスト - English

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  • My classmate Christine is the kind of person that everyone would admire.
    • She attends my same french course at university and shares all the pains and problems that evryone at university suffers.
    • First of all she is a really outgoing, open-minded, intelligent and nice person.
    • When you have a problem or when you just want to have fun, she is there to help you.
    • At the moment she lives in Rome, but she comes from Matera, a little city in the couth of Italy.
    • I have known her during my academic carreer.
    • Twice a week she goes to the gym and what is more, she loves spending her freetime cooking cakes, cupcakes, biscuits and every sort of sweet things.
  • To put it briefly, she is cake-addicted.
    • As concerns the future, her dream is to become an interpreter for the italian embassay in London.
  • Therefore, she would like to move to England and have a family there.
  • To conclude, this is a short portrait of my beautiful friend Christine.
    • My hope is that she could fulfill all her dreams one day.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English