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  • The advantages of moving to the U.S.A.

  • These days, the economic crisis has affected quite all the countries in Europe and it has caused a reduction of the available jobs for young workers.
  • For this reason, many people are taking into account the possibility to move to the U.S.A. to find a job.
  • This decision could have three advantages.
  • The first advantage is the possibility to learn a new language.
    • Indeed, being forced to live and work with english native speakers, people wuold be obliged to learn the foreign language.
    • Moreover, it is well known that English is a worldwide spoken language, so if you learn it you could go wherever you want without problems.
    • The second advantage is the opportunity to find the job of your dreams.
    • It is commonly believed that in the U.S.A. everyone can find the job he had always wanted, because the economical scenery is bigger and wide, therefore it would be easier to find the job of your life.
    • The final advantage is the chance to see new places and know different cultures, that would certainly make your life more exciting and interesting.
    • To conclude, moving abroad can have many positive effects on yourself as concerns skills development, new experiences and chances to do your favourite job, but it is possible only having courage and facing risks.

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    • These days, the economic crisis has affected quite all the countries in Europe and it has caused a reduction of the available jobs for young workers.
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    • Moreover, it is well known that English is a worldwide spoken language, so if you learn it you could go wherever you want without problems.
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    • Moreover, it is well known that English is a worldwidlanguage spoken language, sworldwide. So if you learn it you could go wherever you want without any problems.
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    • It is commonly believed that in the U.S.A. everyone can find the job he had always wanted, because the economical scenery is bigger and wide, therefore it would be easier to find the job of your life.
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    • It is commonly believed that in the U.S.A. everyone can find the job he had always wanted, because the economical sceneryario is bigger and wide, tr. Therefore it would be easier to find the job of your life.
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    • The final advantage is the chance to see new places and know different cultures, that would certainly make your life more exciting and interesting.
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    • The final advantage is the chance to see new places and to know about different cultures, that would certainly make your life more exciting and interesting.
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    • To conclude, moving abroad can have many positive effects on yourself as concerns skills development, new experiences and chances to do your favourite job, but it is possible only having courage and facing risks.
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    • To conclude, moving abroad can have many positive effects on yourself as concernslike skills development, new experiences and chances to findo your favourite job, but it is possible only havingafter having enough courage and facing risks.
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