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this Summer
The school is going to end.
- For this summer I'd like to go abroad maybe London, Oxford ore Liverpool but I think that my mother is not in agreement with me, she prefer countries such as Egypt, Tunisia or Greece.
- I hate those hot countries I want to go in England!
At the End I won't go anywhere I feel it.

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- The school is going to end.
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- For this summer I'd like to go abroad maybe London, Oxford ore Liverpool but I think that my mother is not in agreement with me, she prefer countries such as Egypt, Tunisia or Greece.
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- ~~For t~~ This summer I'd like to go abroad maybe London, Oxford ore Liverpool but I think that my mother idoes not in agree~~ment~~ with me, she prefer countries such as Egypt, Tunisia or Greece.
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- ~~For t~~This summer I'd like to go abroad, maybe London, Oxford ore Liverpool, but I think that my mother idoes not in agree~~ment~~ with me~~, s~~. She prefers countries such as Egypt, Tunisia orand Greece.
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- I hate those hot countries I want to go in England!
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- I hate those hot countries, I want to go into England!
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- At the End I won't go anywhere I feel it.
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