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Texto de Juliya1235 - English

  • Many people would prefer to work from home

    • Today there are a lot of people, who work from home.
    • Some people prefer to work at an offica or an enterprise.
    • From my point of view, working at home is very suitable, comfortable and effective.
  • Indeed, many people work on the Internet nowadays.
  • So, they do not need to go to the office or the enterprise.
    • If they have access to the Internet at their home, they can work without any problems from their home.
    • Moreover, people decide to work at home because they want to spend moretime with the members of their family.
  • For example, many women work nowadays.
    • So, they do not have a lot of time fir playing with children.
    • But if they work from home, they willbe able to earn some money and bring up children at once.
    • Some opponents might say that working at home is troublesome and ineffective.
    • There is always something, which is needed to fo, at every home.
    • So, people, who work from home, often distract from their work.
    • To a certain extent, it is right mbut we should not forget that people, who work at home, can make their routine day by themselves.
  • It means that they can work and do household chores too.
    • To sum it up, I want to say that every human is individual.
    • For someone working at the office is boring and depressing, but somebody really like it.

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