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The Internet is the biggest evil of our time
- Many people think that the Internet is the worst invention.
- Others believe that it is the best friend of every human nowadays.
- From my point of view, the Internet is very useful invention.
- Indeed, nowadays people do not need to go to libraries for finding necessary information because the Internet is the source of diverse information.
- For example, student can use it for writing essays and reports.
- Scientists can use it for their researches.
- Secondly, people can buy clothes, appliances, jewelry and food on the Internet from the comfort of home.
- Moreover, many people work on the Internet nowadays.
- Thanks to it many humans earn a lot of money.
- They develop sites and computer games, open online shops and schools.
- Some opponents might say that the Internet is the biggest evil of our times.
- Many peopke have computer dependent.
- They cannot differ real world from virtual world.
- To a certain extent, it is right, but we should not forget that this disease caused due to misuse of the Internet and computer.
- To sum it up, I want to say thet everything has advantages and disadvantages.
- People should use the Internet and computer for studying and work.
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