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    • Quality of Life - essay

    • The texts verse about the idea of ‘quality of life’, an everyday more widespread term.
    • Both texts agree on the fact that being healthy is key to claim that one has a good quality of life.
    • On the other hand, the additionally consider other contributive elements to the quality of life The first texts suggest that there is a broad variety of items included under the term of quality of life, and only few people will join them all.
    • On this matter, I believe that pursuing all the criteria of having a good quality of life may actually put you through a lot of struggles – finding an ideal job, meeting wonderful people, living in an environment that suits you… Although, on the whole, no one would dispute that if you achieve those purposes, the quality of life gained would make up for the sufferance and harshness to get there.
    • Additionally, this first text puts forward that while health is an item of quality of life in control of the individual, a lot other factors, such as those depending on nature and climate, are not.
  • The second text raises the issue of mobility, in the context of being possible to move from your home country to a better one.
    • This, however, is not always possible.
  • Instead, it is more desirable to solve quality life problems from within – family and home context – rather than emigrate so as to leave the trouble behind.
    • This texts also exposes a major concept, the existence of cities where life is supposed to be better, even I perfect harmony with all its elements so people live there happily.
    • Personally, I state that working commonly towards a better city is a direct path to transform the shame of belonging to a city into being proud of living in it and have participated in its improvement.
  • All in all, I am of the opinion that a good quality of life is not earned for free, but rather obtained through effort.
    • And, although some factors scape to our control, succeeding as this regard is also a matter of phycology.
    • This is to say, you will have a better quality of life if you are aware of what con can achieve and go for it, you will eventually settle in a comfortable lifestyle that will live to your realistic expectations.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

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    • On the other hand, the additionally consider other contributive elements to the quality of life The first texts suggest that there is a broad variety of items included under the term of quality of life, and only few people will join them all.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • On the other hand, the additionally considered other contributive elements to the quality of life.
      The first text
      s suggests that there is a broad variety of items included under the term of quality of life, and only few people will join them all.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
    • On this matter, I believe that pursuing all the criteria of having a good quality of life may actually put you through a lot of struggles – finding an ideal job, meeting wonderful people, living in an environment that suits you… Although, on the whole, no one would dispute that if you achieve those purposes, the quality of life gained would make up for the sufferance and harshness to get there.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • On this matter, I believe that pursuing all the criteria of having a good quality of life may actually put you through a lot of struggles – finding an ideal job, meeting wonderful people, living in an environment that suits you… Although, on the whole, no one would dispute that if you achieve thoese purposes, the quality of life gained would make up for the sufferance and harshness to get there.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4
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    • Additionally, this first text puts forward that while health is an item of quality of life in control of the individual, a lot other factors, such as those depending on nature and climate, are not.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Additionally, this first text puts forward the idea that while health is an item of quality of life in control of the individual, a lot of other factors, such as those depending on nature and climate, are not.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
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    • The second text raises the issue of mobility, in the context of being possible to move from your home country to a better one.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6
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    • Instead, it is more desirable to solve quality life problems from within – family and home context – rather than emigrate so as to leave the trouble behind.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8
  • Zdanie 9
    • This texts also exposes a major concept, the existence of cities where life is supposed to be better, even I perfect harmony with all its elements so people live there happily.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • This texts also exposes a major concept, the existence of cities where life is supposed to be better, even I in perfect harmony with all its elements s. So people live there happily.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9
  • Zdanie 10
    • Personally, I state that working commonly towards a better city is a direct path to transform the shame of belonging to a city into being proud of living in it and have participated in its improvement.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Personally, I state that working commonly towards a building a better city is a direct path to transform the shame of belonging to a city into being proud of living in it and haveing participated in its improvement.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10
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    • All in all, I am of the opinion that a good quality of life is not earned for free, but rather obtained through effort.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11
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    • This is to say, you will have a better quality of life if you are aware of what con can achieve and go for it, you will eventually settle in a comfortable lifestyle that will live to your realistic expectations.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • This is to say, you will have a better quality of life if you are aware of what conyou can achieve and go for it, you will eventually settle in a comfortable lifestyle that will live up to your realistic expectations. ¶
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 13DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 13