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Текст од Juliya1235 - English

  • Studying without computers

    • Children study worse without computers.
  • Today every child can use a computer.
    • Some people think that children cannot study wellwithout the computers.
    • Others believe that it is not true.
    • In my opinion, the children cannot study without the computers.
    • Indeed, thanks to these devices people can find a different information.
  • So, it really helps pupils to write essays and reports.
  • Secondly, students do not have time to go to libraries.
  • Finding necessary information in a book takes a lot of time.
    • If you need to write report, you will have to read several books, select the desired information and write it.
    • Thanks to the Internet and the computers it takes less time.
    • Moreover, the pupils have to prepare for manyexams nowadays.
    • The Internet helps in it a lot.
  • For example, you can find a theory on any subject and pass a test on any topic.
    • Some opponents might say that the children can study well without the computers.
    • For this they should read more books, go the libraries and write by hand.
  • However, I disagree with these contentions.
    • The children cannot learn like before.
  • Also they do not have free time for this.
  • So, it is impossible.
    • To sun it up, I want to say that we should not be so dependent on the computers and the Internet.

МОЛИМО, ПОМОЗИТЕ ИСПРАВИТИ СВАКУ РЕЧЕНИЦУ! - English