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I.University (it's for an important oral exam)

• Today we will think out the notion of places and forms of power by talk about universities.

• (Hi everyone, i will ask you to put all your attention on this text, it's really important for me :) i'd like to thank you if you correct it. it would be really nice from you, It's just the first part of the oral ) So, the debate of the day will be the entrance in american universities.

• The students are motived to go at university to reach a job by having a diploma and they also like the student life.

• By comparing France to United States we can see that the cost of Universities are really different, around 200 and 300 euros in France while in United States where it costs around 5000 and 15000.

• That means that most of them have got to take credits or borrow money .

• This system pulls many protests movements with the young students, they demonstrate the universities fees by burning cupboards how we've seen it particulary in a video.

• In the streets students are protesting very violently but they won't ever be able to pay the huge fees they caused.

• That's why we can ask if is it really advantageous for the students to go to university for the higher education … At first we shall see the cost of university and secondly the different skills and views