添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

EmmanuelCABからのテキスト - English

  • An email in English

  • Hello, I have to send an email to a school for information.
    • I wonder if I'm right.
    • can you correct me please ?
  • " Dear Madam / Sir, I would like some information.
    • I'm a french student and I'm currently in first year of business school specializing in the sector of fashion, luxury and design ( bachelor) .
    • I am looking for what I might do next.
    • I am currently working on a lookbook and I am helped by a teacher introductory fashion.
    • And I master all forms of drawings (I did a year in the workshops of the Louvre).
    • I wonder if I can introduce myself to the "master in fashion" of your institute?
  • Yours faithfully, " Thanks

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English