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  • An opinion essay

  • Some people say that food is our friend, while others think that it may become an enemy.
    • Nowadays, more and more people suffer from overeating deseases.
    • There are many fastfoods and GM food which can influence at our health and shape.
    • But others think that food aren't so harm for us.
    • In my opinion, everyone must care about their healh and healthy shape.
    • There are many advantages of diets: you will be stronger and full of energy after pare weeks.
    • By the way, you maybe have friends who interesting your idea of health food strategy and who will support you at thaat.
    • Unfortunaly, other people not concern about which food they eat and this bring a lot of bad consequences.
    • I mean that our body want to get nutritions from clear and well ecologically food and resist the fastfood garbage.
    • To sum up, I think that world iprovement starts for care about our health and health of each other.

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