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    • Science and Technology The reason for picking no war in my utopia is because I know what real war is and how it can destroy you mentally and physically.
    • Instead of trying to make a bomb, scientist and robots will help the people instead of killing them.
    • Technology is a big part of my society, it is something that influences the way society works and helps the people of ‘The secret of the cities’ in their daily lives.
    • Technology brings in my utopia things like: - transportation with high-tech cars, trains and spaceships - better education resources, like you can see in my trailer - and living condition, like high-tech buildings and houses My utopia would encourage scientific research in all fields but not in all the cities.
    • Only robots and adults (in adult city) can do scientific research.
    • There will be so much different energy sources like solar energy, kinetic energy,..

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    • Science and Technology The reason for picking no war in my utopia is because I know what real war is and how it can destroy you mentally and physically.
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      T      In my opinion, the reason for picking no war in my utopia is because I know what real war is and how it can should be no war ever as I know how a war would destroy you mentally and physically.
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      The reason for       picking no warhaving peace in my utopianion is because I know what real war is and how it can destroy you mentally and physically.
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    • Technology is a big part of my society, it is something that influences the way society works and helps the people of ‘The secret of the cities’ in their daily lives.
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    • Technology iplays a big part of my society, it is something that influences the way society works and helps the people of ‘The secret of the cities’ in their dailrole in the society as it leverages the community and improves our everyday lives.
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    • Technology brings in my utopia things like: - transportation with high-tech cars, trains and spaceships - better education resources, like you can see in my trailer - and living condition, like high-tech buildings and houses My utopia would encourage scientific research in all fields but not in all the cities.
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      - transportation       withusing high-tech cars, trains and spaceships¶
      - better education      al resources, like you can see in my trailer ¶
      - and       better living condition, like high-tech buildings and houses¶

      My utopia would encourage scientific research in all fields but not in all the cities.
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