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- After I became a graduate student I was seriously engaged in the problems that are discussed in contemporary philosophy of mind.
The result of my research was the article "Consciousness''.
- This article has been awarded in the contest, which was conducted by our department.
- In this article I analyzed the thought experiment philosophical zombie and argued against the idea of the epiphenomenal nature of consciousness.

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- After I became a graduate student I was seriously engaged in the problems that are discussed in contemporary philosophy of mind.
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- After I became a graduate student, I was seriously engaged in the ~~problem~~issues that are discussed in contemporary philosophy of the mind.
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- The result of my research was the article "Consciousness''.
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- This article has been awarded in the contest, which was conducted by our department.
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- In this article I analyzed the thought experiment philosophical zombie and argued against the idea of the epiphenomenal nature of consciousness.
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- In this article I analyzed the thought experiment "philosophical zombie" and argued against the idea of the epiphenomenal nature of consciousness.
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