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One day
- Hi, my name is Lucas I work as a intern, but as I wrote in the title one day I wanna be a busine's man, but for now I'm studding and try to improve my skills.
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- Hi, my name is Lucas I work as a intern, but as I wrote in the title one day I wanna be a busine's man, but for now I'm studding and try to improve my skills.
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- Hi, my name is Lucas. I am working as an intern, but as I wrote in the title one day I wannat to be a busine's ssman, but for now I'm studdying and trying to improve my skills.
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- For now that's all folks!!
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