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Hello !
Hello you !
I'm a french man and I study the luxury, fashion, and design management.
For my future, I have to be really good in English.
So I'm looking for some people who can teach me this language !
- I enjoy the party, the discussions around a glasses !
- So if you're interest come on !

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- I'm a french man and I study the luxury, fashion, and design management.
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- For my future, I have to be really good in English.
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- I enjoy the party, the discussions around a glasses !
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- I enjoy theo party~~, the~~ and discuss~~ions around a glasses !~~ with a few drinks.
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