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- hi, I'm just entry in this community.
- I don't understand how use this site very good.
- I like learn english because between two years, i would study in England.
- Help me=) thank's

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- hi, I'm just entry in this community.
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- hHi, I'm have just ~~entry in this community.~~joined this social network.
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- I don't understand how use this site very good.
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- I don't understand ~~how~~/know how to use this site very ~~good.~~well.
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- I like learn english because between two years, i would study in England.
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- I would like to learn eEnglish because ~~between~~in about two years, iI w~~ould~~ant to study in England.
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- I would like tp learn eEnglish ~~because betwee~~in two years~~, i~~ because I would like study in England.
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- Help me=) thank's
  투표하세요!
- Help me=) thank's.
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