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- Today I went go skiing with my family.There were a lot of people.So that's why it was a little bit dangerous.I used to fall down a lot of time,but it was very funny.I think I broke my finger,cause it hearts.

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- Today I went go skiing with my family.There were a lot of people.So that's why it was a little bit dangerous.I used to fall down a lot of time,but it was very funny.I think I broke my finger,cause it hearts.
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- Today I went go skiing with my family.There were a lot of people.So that's why it was a little bit dangerous.I used to fall down ~~a lot of time~~often,but it was very funny.I think I broke my finger,cause it heaurts.
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- Today I went go skiing with my family.There were a lot of people.~~So t~~That's why it was a little bit dangerous. I often used to fall down ~~a lot of time~~,but it was very funny. I think I broke my finger, because it ~~hearts~~'s hurting.
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- Today I went gofor skiing with my family.There were a lot of people.So that's why it ~~was~~became a little bit dangerous.I ~~used to fa~~fell down a lot of times,but it was very funny.I think I broke my finger,because it heaurts.
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