添削

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aylwin_rivからのテキスト - English

    • The City of Dream

    • The name of our city is "The City of Dream" because it is simply perfect.
    • It is located in south of Europe.
    • Our city is characterized for being a large city because it haves with 5000 habitants.
    • Our type of government is an incredibly egalitarian and just republic.
    • Also, our have a wonderful mayoress who cares about every citizens and has a firm hand to corruption.
  • Her name is Rouse Clinton.
    • The most part of our city are women.
    • This is why, the political party preferent is "Women to power".

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English