添削

CHAPTERS 8 9 10 11 12 13 14

• CHAPTER 5 There was fire on the screen that surrounded him almost everything and a fleet of aircraft tanker releasing a dense mist of chemicals above the charred treetops.

• -I had knowledge that the youngsters of his age knew to recognize the smallest difference between the sexes.

• -In the margins - recalled Rodolfo who departed permit - for any meeting of the scale of this exhibition are usually prowl debased and corrupt elements whose sole purpose is to take advantage of the unwary.

• I will not dignify it by mentioning the name of the sinister quarter where it is more likely to encounter that kind of dangers.

• Own vulgarity of its appearance, especially at night, speaks for itself and discourages everyone, except to the most reckless, delay in contemplation, and especially in exploration, lucrative little pleasures offered there.

• Come Cave laboratory equipment to fill the Heath, the Moor, colossal magnets, full of apparatuses of measuring electrical arcs of black iron panels terminals and cranks, appears the Army equipped with the new deadly gas pumps...

• The adenoids is bombed, electrocuted, poisoned, changes of colour and form, appear yellow fat nodules that exceed the height of the trees, before the cameras of magnesium from the press, a horrible pseudopod creeps towards the cordon of troops and, suddenly, it sweeps to all an observation post with a flood of nasty Orange mucus, which the unfortunate are swallowed without yelling , but, in fact, laughing, enjoying...

• We talk about how fragile we are, then entered a bald man with an orange outfit and explained the process of freezing, but I didn't understand it and made as if he had caught it. That I liked.

• He me escrutó more carefully still, perhaps considering my comment too stupid to answer either interpreting what I said as a gesture aimed at the compulsory and social Convention in those circumstances. I waited.

• Oh, sunk peal of bells of twilight.

• Harlot that illuminates a creature between chills dead.

• But a quieter humanity bleeds into dark cave forging the Redeemer face with hard metals.

• CHAPTER 7 I left it there and began to walk beyond the parterres, now on a dirt road, opening me step through a wall in the garden that had a gate up to dense groves of fake trees.

• I was afraid, that thing without features, naked, without sex.

• -You know, he always acted as secret agent X-11, on the way between two secret locations acted.

• Not I never spoke with anyone.

• -Can that really had a very intense secret life - I suggested. -What will! -What will!

• -repeated scornfully bar Manager-.

• It was one of those guys that are always making models of planes and bustling it. Not bad.

• It is already made.

• Close the zipper from the macuto, turns off the lamp and returns to leave her in the same position it was.

• Maybe is time to meet with someone, time to share a drink between comrades still.

• Go back through the maze of fiberboard under the pale yellowish light, against a stream of girls who enter with galoshes; distant, is the only one not smiling; Here there's no time for hits on the back, or flattery, do you know?, he has yet to make deliveries of the day...