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    • An US travel

    • The largest travel that I have ever done it has been to US to visit a friend a couple of years ago.
    • I went to New York where my friend live and we have spent together almost two months.
    • There, I had the opportunity of visiting different famous place such as the Empire state building, Manhattan or Statue of Liberty among another place and monuments.
    • I also had the opportunity of take a ride on a cruise ship and it was fantastic because I have never done it.
    • Moreover, people who I met there were very kind and they all treated me so friendly, despite of American culture is not as Spanish culture.
    • If I have the another opportunity to return to US I will do it without doubt though it’s truth that the price of fight is expensive and it takes you many hours but the experience is great.

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    • The largest travel that I have ever done it has been to US to visit a friend a couple of years ago.
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    • The larongest traveljourney that I have ever done it has beenundertaken is to US to visit a friend a couple of years ago.
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    • The largest travel thatip I have ever dgone it has been toon was to the US to visit a friend a couple of years ago.
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    • There, I had the opportunity of visiting different famous place such as the Empire state building, Manhattan or Statue of Liberty among another place and monuments.
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    • There, I hadgot the opportunity tof visiting the different famous places such as the Empire state building, Manhattan or the Statue of Liberty among another places and monuments.
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    • There, I had the opportunity tof visiting different famous places such as the Empire sState building, Manhattan or, and the Statue of Liberty among many other places and monuments.
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    • I also had the opportunity of take a ride on a cruise ship and it was fantastic because I have never done it.
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    • I also had thegot an opportunity tof take a ride on a cruise ship and it was fantastic because I haved never done it before.
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    • I alsoAlso, I had the opportunity tof take a ride on a cruise ship, and it was fantastic because I have never done ittaken one before.
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    • Moreover, people who I met there were very kind and they all treated me so friendly, despite of American culture is not as Spanish culture.
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    • Moreover, the people whom I met there were very kind and they all treated me soin a friendly manner, despite ofthe American culture is not asbeing Spanish culture.
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    • Moreover, the people who I met there were very kind, and they all treated me soin a very friendly manner, despite of American culture is not asbeing much different from Spanish culture.
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    • If I have the another opportunity to return to US I will do it without doubt though it’s truth that the price of fight is expensive and it takes you many hours but the experience is great.
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    • If I have the another opportunity to return to US I will do it without a doubt , although it’s truth that the price of fight is expensive and it takes you many hours but the experience is great. ¶
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    • If I have theget another opportunity to return to US I will do it without any doubt t. Though it’s truth that the price of fthe flight is expensive and it takes you many hours to reach there but the experience is great. ¶
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    • If I have the another opportunity to return to US, I will do it without doubt . Although it’s truthe that the price of the fight is expensive, and it takes you many hours but. However, the experience is great. ¶
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