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    • Travelling

    • Travelling faster, cheaper and easier is becoming normal nowadays.
    • Now most than never in the history to travel to opposite site on the planet its possible and all this is due to the giant technological develop which we have had during the last century.
    • The develop of international travel is synonymous of job for many people, fluency of money in a region or area and exchange of different languages, people and cultures.
    • Considering other consequences of international travel, we can also point out the negative impact that people make the environment, the circulation of illegal people to others countries or the rise of the price in a specific place due to the tourism.
    • Beyond of positive or negative aspect of this issue, travel is an important thing which helps us to life better and comfortably and we should take advantage of it.

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    • Now most than never in the history to travel to opposite site on the planet its possible and all this is due to the giant technological develop which we have had during the last century.
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    • Now mostre than never in the history tof travel toits possible to reach the opposite sitde onf the planet its possible and all this is due to the giant technological development which we have had during the last century.
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    • The develop of international travel is synonymous of job for many people, fluency of money in a region or area and exchange of different languages, people and cultures.
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    • The development of international travel is synonymous of jobwith employment for many people, fluency of money in a region or area and exchange of different languages, people and cultures.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 3Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 3
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    • Considering other consequences of international travel, we can also point out the negative impact that people make the environment, the circulation of illegal people to others countries or the rise of the price in a specific place due to the tourism.
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    • Considering other consequences of international travel, we can also point out the negative impact that people make to the environment, the circulmigration of illegal people to others countries or the rise of the price in a specific place due to the tourism.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 4Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 4
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    • Beyond of positive or negative aspect of this issue, travel is an important thing which helps us to life better and comfortably and we should take advantage of it.
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    • Beyond ofthe positive or negative aspect of this issue, traveling is an important thing which helps us to lifve better and with comfortably and we should take advantage of it. ¶
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 5Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 5