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About my work
I love my work.
- I'm work on sales departmend , in the big international company . I'm manager .
- Everyday I work in office or with customers.

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- About my work
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- I love my work.
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- I'm work on sales departmend , in the big international company . I'm manager .
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- I'm work oing in sales departmendt , in ~~the~~a big international company . I'm a manager .
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- I'm working on sales departmendt , in ~~the~~a big international company . I'm manager .
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- Everyday I work in office or with customers.
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- Everyday I work in the office or with the customers.
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