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Text from sico - English

  • my day!

    • good afternoon,at this time,i'm verry tired because i was go to the zoo visiting animals and past a good time whith my sister in law and my nephew.tomorow i must relaxe.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • good afternoon,at this time,i'm verry tired because i was go to the zoo visiting animals and past a good time whith my sister in law and my nephew.tomorow i must relaxe.
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    • gGood afternoon,at this time,i now, I'm verry tired because iI was goent to the zoo for visiting animals and pasthave a good time whith my sister -in -law and my nephew.t Tomorrow i mustI have to relaxe.
    • gGood afternoon,a. At this time,i I'm verry tired because i was go. Today, I went to the zoo, visitinged the animals, and pasthad a good time whith my sister -in -law and my nephew.t Tomorow i must, I will relaxe.
    • gGood afternoon,a.At this time,imoment,I'm verry tired because i was go to the zoo visiting.The reason of my tireness is that today, I visited the zoo and visited different types of animals and past.I had a good time whith my sister in law and my nephew.t Tomorow i must, I will relaxe.
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