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Texto de Bertilde - English

    • Life is just the same life

  • Now, I am at home living with my parents, i realize that the leisure time isn´t really for me, i am n´t used to do nothing at home.
  • I am feeling so weird about the leisure time.I hope not to fall depressed but be motivated to do something and being able to find a better job for me and being web designer professional.
  • I don´t know very much in english and i wanna improve every time my pronunciation and writing too.
    • I wanna study some web developer to join with designing.
    • I wanna go to Europe, to meet people, i like different cultures of Europe and i wanna understand people there, because just I am interested thanks for the amazing experience they have in the life.
    • Before quit at work three days ago, i was doing as web designer professionally, i liked very much it yet.
    • I prefer doing well the website with the truth passion with the people who trust me and feeling comfortable, but sometimes i asked myself why the truth passion is falling confused and lost slowly, just because the uncomfortable situation makes lost my trust passion, i will fix it out as soon as possible and I should n´t allow it ever to lost my truth passion doing website.
    • I love the art,the history,the science, the movies,i am n´t used to read something because in my mind does n´t stop thinking in new ideas or i can´t concentrate rarely.
    • I always wanna go away and learn everything all the time and going to Europe.
    • So, What do you think with my writing, it is bad or not, hope improve it every time, i wanna dominate the english language very soon! :) Citlalli

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    • I am feeling so weird about the leisure time.I hope not to fall depressed but be motivated to do something and being able to find a better job for me and being web designer professional.
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    • I wanna go to Europe, to meet people, i like different cultures of Europe and i wanna understand people there, because just I am interested thanks for the amazing experience they have in the life.
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    • I wanna go to Europe, to meet people, i like different cultures of Europe and i wanna understand people there, because just I am interested thanks for the amazing experience they have in the life.¶¶I want to go to Europe and meet different people in there. I would like to experience the different cultures they have and understand how different Europeans are. I am very interested to them as I got some amazing experiences with them.
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    • I wannat to go to Europe, to meet people, i lik and meet different people over there. I like the different cultures of Europe and i wannat to understand the people there, because just I am interested thanks for theover there. I felt interested with them and I am thankful to them as I got an amazing experience they have inrough their life.
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    • I prefer doing well the website with the truth passion with the people who trust me and feeling comfortable, but sometimes i asked myself why the truth passion is falling confused and lost slowly, just because the uncomfortable situation makes lost my trust passion, i will fix it out as soon as possible and I should n´t allow it ever to lost my truth passion doing website.
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    • I prefer doing well the website with the truth passion with the people who trust me and feeling comfortable, but sometimes i asked myself why the truth passion is falling confused and lost slowly, just because the uncomfortable situation makes lost my trust passion, i will fix it out as soon as possible and I should n´t allow it ever to lost my truth passion doing website.¶¶I love doing my job as a web designer with a true passion on it. I love it better when I am working with the people I trust and feel comfortable with but sometimes I get confused and slowly I lost my trust and comfort with the people I work with. I somehow lost the passion of my job. Now I realised I should not allow others to ruin my passion as a web designer.
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    • I love the art,the history,the science, the movies,i am n´t used to read something because in my mind does n´t stop thinking in new ideas or i can´t concentrate rarely.
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    • I love the art,the history,the science, the movies,i am n´t used to read something because in my mind does n´t stop thinking in new ideas or i can´t concentrate rarely.¶¶I love art, history and science. I love watching movie too. I could not red something a lot as my mind keeps thinking on new ideas and I find it hard to concentrate.
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    • I love the art,the history,the science, the and movies,i a. I'm n´ot used to read someanything because in my mind does n´n't stop thinking inabout new ideas or iand usually I can´'t concentrate rarely.
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    • So, What do you think with my writing, it is bad or not, hope improve it every time, i wanna dominate the english language very soon! :) Citlalli
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    • So, What do you think with my writing, it is bad or not, hope improve it every time, i wanna dominate the english language very soon! :)¶¶¶So, what do you think of my writing? Is it bad or not? I hope to improve it soon. I want to improve my English as time goes by! ¶¶¶Citlalli
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    • So, What do you think withabout my writing, its ist bad or not, I hope it improve its every time, iI wanna dominamaster the eEnglish language very soon! :)¶¶Citlalli
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