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AIUTA A CORREGGERE ORA! Errato

Testo da Darica - English

  • Letter of intent

    • Letter of intent The undersigned Hincu Lucia, originally from Republic of Moldova, 25 years old, I finished the Technical University of Moldova, I worked in areas such as sales consultant, woman cook, but these don't represent me.
  • I always wanted something more (...).
    • I noticed with interest the success of your business - founded in 1913 by Arnold Heinrich Deichmann in Essen city - leaders: Martin Fischer and Martin Heynen ~ approximately 36,150 people are employed in the company with a revenue of € 4.9 billion on year - with about 3,600 local shops in Germany and in 22 other European countries like Bulgaria, Italy, Austria, Poland, Romania, Czech Republic and more others...
  • The reason I am writing to you is because I would like to know if it is possible to put my services at your disposal to represent your company for sales in Moldova.
    • Because of our market isn't pronounced the product Deichmann, I wish to make it famous in RM for the prosperity of the enterprise and for my personal career development.
    • The opportunity for a discussion about how we could use the company's interests and mine at the same time would be welcome.
  • With respect Hincu Lucia

PER FAVORE, AIUTA A CORREGGERE OGNI FRASE! - English

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    • Letter of intent The undersigned Hincu Lucia, originally from Republic of Moldova, 25 years old, I finished the Technical University of Moldova, I worked in areas such as sales consultant, woman cook, but these don't represent me.
      Vota adesso!
    • Letter of intent¶
      The undersigned Hincu Lucia, originally from       the Republic of Moldova,.I am 25 years old,. I finished the Technical University of Moldova,. I worked in areas such as sales consultant, woman cook, but these don't repinteresent me.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Commenti
      Vota adesso!
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 1AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 1
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    • I noticed with interest the success of your business - founded in 1913 by Arnold Heinrich Deichmann in Essen city - leaders: Martin Fischer and Martin Heynen ~ approximately 36,150 people are employed in the company with a revenue of € 4.9 billion on year - with about 3,600 local shops in Germany and in 22 other European countries like Bulgaria, Italy, Austria, Poland, Romania, Czech Republic and more others...
      Vota adesso!
    • I noticed with interest the success of your business - founded in 1913 by Arnold Heinrich Deichmann in Essen city - leaders: Martin Fischer and Martin Heynen ~ approximately 36,150 people are employed in the company with a revenue of € 4.9 billion onin a year - with about 3,600 local shops in Germany and in 22 other European countries like Bulgaria, Italy, Austria, Poland, Romania, Czech Republic and more others...
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Commenti
      Vota adesso!
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 3AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 3
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    • The reason I am writing to you is because I would like to know if it is possible to put my services at your disposal to represent your company for sales in Moldova.
      Vota adesso!
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 4AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 4
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    • Because of our market isn't pronounced the product Deichmann, I wish to make it famous in RM for the prosperity of the enterprise and for my personal career development.
      Vota adesso!
    • Because of our market ihasn't pronounced the product Deichmann, I wish to make it famous in RM for the prosperity of the enterprise and for my personal career development.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Commenti
      Vota adesso!
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 5AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 5
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