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Do you play or watch any sports?
- Hi Amanda, It was so nice to hear from you.
- Firstly, I love playing football but I can't any take execirse because I've bad back since two years.
Therefore, my sports favorite is football and I only can it on TV.
Secondly, it's my favorite sports because my dream was being a football player.
Moreover, I'm a follower of Seville Football Club, which is my team.
I travel to see it.
Also, in the future, I would like to be a soccer coach.
I hope that you all great weekend.

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- Do you play or watch any sports?
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- Hi Amanda, It was so nice to hear from you.
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- Hi Amanda,!¶
  It was so nice to hear from you.
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- Firstly, I love playing football but I can't any take execirse because I've bad back since two years.
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- Firstly, I love playing football but I can't any take exercirse because I've a bad back since the last two years.
  AjayKumar 댓글
  
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- Therefore, my sports favorite is football and I only can it on TV.
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- Secondly, it's my favorite sports because my dream was being a football player.
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- Moreover, I'm a follower of Seville Football Club, which is my team.
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- I travel to see it.
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- Also, in the future, I would like to be a soccer coach.
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- I hope that you all great weekend.
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