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  • Why do people travel?

    • The world is a book, and those who do not travel, read only a page – said Augustine.
    • This proverb is saying about cognition our world.
    • Our world is one big and unknown book, which we must to read.
    • We know only our house that is one page.
    • If we want to read all book, we will traveling.
    • People travel not only to discover the world for themselves.
    • One of the reasons is health or to refresh bodies and spirit.
    • People work every day, get tired and sometimes be ill.
    • Then they get leave and start to relax.
  • People say that a chance is as good as a rest.
    • This is true because you escape the daily routine.
    • Also, can say that you recharge the batteries by relaxing with friend and family.
    • You distract from all problems and later work with new found vigour.
    • Travel for people nowadays is search new feels.
  • The daily routine is very boring and monotonous.
    • But travelling stimulate senses and is source of inspiration.
  • Leave no one indifferent, for example, the awesome majesty of the Elbrus, the cleanest lake Baikal, remote islands.
    • They will greet the creative travel at every turn and twist of their way.
    • And in the end, people travel for discover of the world.
  • They meet with different culture and people from other countries.
    • It opens your eye to not only a wide variety of different places but to variety of different culture.
    • Also, nicely have friends around the world.
    • When we meet with another culture, we better understand people from there, keep an open mind and be more tolerant.
    • This is very useful and we get education experience.
    • In conclusion, I can say that travelling is way of spending free time very popular.
    • People want to study the world and to travel.
    • When I say at the start, we want to read all book and learn all world.
    • Urge to travel is the nature.

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