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    • Some about my passion for tennis

  • Well, I think it all started about 11 years ago.
    • In my school exist a tennis court, but never get interested about the sport, until one day, when I tryed to play for first time.
    • After that, I felt very good playing tennis, the sensation of hit the ball was amazing.
    • Few time later, I started to watch tennis on tv, and Roger Federer were the only thing I heard when it reffers about tennis.
    • Since then, I became his fan, I enjoyed watching his games, and some times I get up at 3am to watch him playing in Australia.
    • For all this, was a great moment when he came to Colombia in 2012.
    • My parents gave me the greatest present I could expect, a ticket to watch him play in Bogota, and that day was one of te best for me.

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    • In my school exist a tennis court, but never get interested about the sport, until one day, when I tryed to play for first time.
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    • In my school exists a tennis court, but never geot interested about the sport, until one day, when I tryied to play for the first time.
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    • In my school exthere ist a tennis court, but. I never gethad interested about in the sport, until one day, when I tryied to play it for first time.
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    • Few time later, I started to watch tennis on tv, and Roger Federer were the only thing I heard when it reffers about tennis.
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    • Few times later, I started to watch tennis on tvTV, and Roger Federer wereas the only thing that I heard when it refferwas about tennis.
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    • FewSome time later, I started to watch tennis on tv, andTV. Roger Federer wereas the only thing I heard when it refferwas about tennis.
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    • Since then, I became his fan, I enjoyed watching his games, and some times I get up at 3am to watch him playing in Australia.
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    • Since then, I became his fan, I enjoyed watching his games, and some times I geot up at 3 am to watch him playing in Australia.
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    • Since then, I became've been his fan,. I enjoyed watching his games, and some times I get up at 3am AM to watch him playing in Australia.
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    • My parents gave me the greatest present I could expect, a ticket to watch him play in Bogota, and that day was one of te best for me.
      투표하세요!
    • My parents gave me the greatest present I could expect, a ticket to watch him play in Bogota, and that day was one of the best for me.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture 댓글
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    • My parents gave me the greatest present I could expect,; a ticket to watch him play in Bogota, and t. That day was one of the best days ever for me.
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