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Text from vaness182 - English

  • May 2nd

  • Today is May 2nd.
  • Today is Thursday.
    • This morning The PE teacher did a test, I don't knew.
    • The test was 30 minutes run and I waited while Xiomy ran on the career, I sat over the grass and I listened music.
    • After I changed my sport clothes and I did warm up before the career, I feel so scared.
    • Then I put the headphones and I focus on myself and I said to my self I can, can.
    • When the teacher said get ready, go.
    • I don't know what happed, 'cause, I stayed a second frozen, and Xiomy shouted to me: "come on", and I started to run, when passed 20 minutes, I felt very tired, and each lap Xiomy said to me: "carry on".
    • When I finished the test, The teacher said to me: congratulations.
    • I bought A new Munchen's Jersey, and when we returned home with the others girls, my neighbour started to flirt with Nicolette still they stay talk and talk, Xiomy, Vivi and I get together to saw a movie and tomorrow will be Friday.
    • I shall to go with the sport clothes and the new jersey and we planed tomorrow on the afternoon go to the mall, and meet new people.

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