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Сообщение от carlos_alb - English

    • I want to get a holiday job

    • Hi Michael, It was so nice to hear from you.
    • Firstly, you're 23 years old and you should think in search working to live with your girlfriend and your sons.
    • Therefore you should start to work already.
    • Secondly, you must work in any job due to the economy is very bad.
    • When you get a job, you'll feel better and you will can rent a house and pay all your expenses.
    • When I was 23, I was in the same situation so I can advice you.
    • I'm sure you will get everything you need.
  • I hope you have a great weekend.

Пожалуйста, помогите исправить все предложения. - English