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- A'm Egor , hello !
- I was born 07.06.2000 in Russian .
- Today i lisin very good music , his so amazing and coll .
- A'm students programmer ...
- And it's my firs message in English.

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- A'm Egor , hello !
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- ~~A'm Egor , hello~~ Hello, I am Egor!
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- I was born 07.06.2000 in Russian .
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- I was born in 07.06.2000 in Russian .
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- Today i lisin very good music , his so amazing and coll .
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- Today ~~i lisin~~I am listening to very good music , which is so amazing and colol .
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- A'm students programmer ...
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- ~~A'm students programmer~~I am a programming student ...
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- And it's my firs message in English.
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- And it's my first message in English. ¶
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