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  • Big Brother

    • Nineteen eighty four is one of the famous novel of the Britannic author George Orwell.
  • This book is considered as an anticipation novel.
    • He introduces us to a world dominated by dictatorships, in which freedom of expression is not allowed, in which thoughts are controlled and propaganda everywhere.
    • The extract we have studied is quite representative of the whole book.
  • Indeed according to the point of view of Winston, the main character, we have a description of a very dark and oppressive atmosphere : he depicts a cold world, with no color.
    • The only one is posters everywhere on which is written in capital letters BIG BROTHER IS WATCHING YOU.
  • Moreover, the author uses verbs associated with ways of looking, like look, snoop into, gaze, watch.
    • It contributes to make the atmosphere oppressive, to give the impression that you are always spied.
    • And it’s the case ! indeed, the hero sees at his window a patrol in an helicopter witch look into every habitations.
    • He mentions the thoughts police as well.
    • It’s totally out of one’s mind : people can be seen as well as heard by the way of telescreen present in every habitation.
    • George Orwell denounces among others the totalitarian regime of his time.
    • The name of the story for example: 1984 is a reference to the rise of the communist in 1948, and some elements of the story are inspired of this regime and of the Nazism too.
    • This story is still up to date, with the current totalitarian regimes all around the world and the terrorism that is on the upswing.
  • Nothing has changed : The environment is still oppressive, stifling.
    • We have to be careful, even in our “free” countries we are spied through new technologies.

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    • He introduces us to a world dominated by dictatorships, in which freedom of expression is not allowed, in which thoughts are controlled and propaganda everywhere.
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    • He introduces us to a world dominated by dictatorships, in which freedom of expression is not allowed, in which thoughts are controlled and there is a propaganda everywhere.
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    • Indeed according to the point of view of Winston, the main character, we have a description of a very dark and oppressive atmosphere : he depicts a cold world, with no color.
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    • The only one is posters everywhere on which is written in capital letters BIG BROTHER IS WATCHING YOU.
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    • The only one isthing is presence of posters everywhere on which it is written in capital letters BIG BROTHER IS WATCHING YOU.
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    • And it’s the case ! indeed, the hero sees at his window a patrol in an helicopter witch look into every habitations.
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    • And it’s the case ! indeed, the hero sees at his window a patrol in an helicopter whitch looks into every habitations.
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    • It’s totally out of one’s mind : people can be seen as well as heard by the way of telescreen present in every habitation.
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    • It’s totally out of one’s mind : people can be seen as well as heard by the way of a telescreen present in every habitation.
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    • The name of the story for example: 1984 is a reference to the rise of the communist in 1948, and some elements of the story are inspired of this regime and of the Nazism too.
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    • The name of the story for example: 1984 is a reference to the rise of the communists in 1948, and some elements of the story are inspired ofrom this regime and ofrom the Nazism too.
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    • This story is still up to date, with the current totalitarian regimes all around the world and the terrorism that is on the upswing.
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    • This story is still up to date, with the current totalitarian regimes all around the world and the terrorism that is on the upswing.
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