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Text from MR-GLOT - English

    • my bedroom's description

    • With the goal to practice and improve my English I would like to describe my bedroom.
    • My bedroom is almost at the end of my little apartment, close to the bathroom and in from of washing place.
    • My bedroom is my small place where I have all my things.
    • Here I have two small beds and cupboard, a wardrobe next to them a tiny table where I normally study.
    • A cause of two beds, my room is smaller but both beds are necessary so we can’t remove them.
    • I also have an old computer which hardly works but it’s useful when I am abroad for talking with my parents.
    • On a wall there is a window which shows neighbor’s house and also another neighbor’s washing place.
    • Over another wall I have a bid flag in from of this one I have a shelve with some small figures and action figures.
  • That’s all, goodbye and good night.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English