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    • Dear Mrs or Mr, You’re currently looking for an International cost controller.
    • An applicant with strong klowdeges of financial organisation and the ability to be proactive by renforcing and improving the extraction and circulation of the data.
  • But also analysis skills related to cost and activity.
    • I’m currently seeking a cost controller position to push further my international work experiences.
    • I had the opportunities to work in financial services in different large companies over a period of five years.
    • This enabled me to acquire efficiently skills and knowledge’s related to the management control position and industrial sector, by being confronted to the management issues, that you have expressed in your job vacation.
    • I am confident that I can perform the job ably and excited about the idea of working in this position within your country.
  • If you would like to schedule an interview or otherwise discuss my interest in this job application, please call me.
  • I will be available at your convenience.
  • Thank you for your consideration.
  • Yours Sincerely,

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    • An applicant with strong klowdeges of financial organisation and the ability to be proactive by renforcing and improving the extraction and circulation of the data.
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    • An applicant with strong klnowledeges of financial organisation and the ability to be proactive by reinforcing and improving the extraction and circulation of the data.
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    • An applicant with strong klnowldeges of financial organiszation and the ability to be proactive by reinforcing and improving the extraction and circulation of the data.
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    • I’m currently seeking a cost controller position to push further my international work experiences.
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    • I’m currently seeking a cost controller position to push further my international work experiences further.
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    • I had the opportunities to work in financial services in different large companies over a period of five years.
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    • I have had the opportunitiesy to work in financial services in different large companies over a period of five years.
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    • This enabled me to acquire efficiently skills and knowledge’s related to the management control position and industrial sector, by being confronted to the management issues, that you have expressed in your job vacation.
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    • This enabled me to acquire efficiently skills and knowledge’s related to the management control position and industrial sector, by being confronted towith the management issues, that which you have expressed in your job vaocation.
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    • I am confident that I can perform the job ably and excited about the idea of working in this position within your country.
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    • I am confident that I can perform the job ably and I am excited about the idea of working in this position within your country.
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    • If you would like to schedule an interview or otherwise discuss my interest in this job application, please call me.
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