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  • Partisan

    • The day Iranian army did readied for fought by Greece's army suddenly rain began to fall down.One of the Iranian soldier told this is tears of sky for our killed soldier and we will receive bad news soon.This news received to king first Parth.
    • He is first king of Parthian dynasty.
    • He laughed and told it is a gift of sky and rain causes of mercy and salvation, not causes of disaster.
    • He change her tactic war for rain and gathered best and fast soldiers.
    • Although their numbers were not large but they were best in the Iranian army.
    • They could defeated Greece's army.The interesting thing in this story is we thought the Partisans who were Communist fighters fought for 50 years ago in the west of Europa, but fact is Partisan is be changed Parthian.
    • The Iranian soldiers who are fought and defeated Greece's army.

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    • The day Iranian army did readied for fought by Greece's army suddenly rain began to fall down.One of the Iranian soldier told this is tears of sky for our killed soldier and we will receive bad news soon.This news received to king first Parth.
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    • The day Iranian army did readied for fought by Greece's army suddenly rain began to fall down.One of the Iranian soldier told this is tears of sky for our killed soldiers and we will receive bad news soon.This news received to king first Parth.
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    • TheOn that day Iranian army didgot readiedy for fought bya fight with Greece's army s. Suddenly rain began to fall down.One of the Iranian soldier told this is the tears of sky for our killed soldier and we will receive bad news soon.This news was received toby king Parth first Parth.
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    • He laughed and told it is a gift of sky and rain causes of mercy and salvation, not causes of disaster.
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    • He laughed and told that it is a gift ofrom the sky and rain causes of mercy and salvation, not causes of disaster.
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    • He laughed and toldsaid that it is a gift ofrom the sky, and rain causesthat rain is an act of mercy and salvation, not a causes of disaster.
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    • They could defeated Greece's army.The interesting thing in this story is we thought the Partisans who were Communist fighters fought for 50 years ago in the west of Europa, but fact is Partisan is be changed Parthian.
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    • They could defeated Greece's army.The interesting thingnotic in this story is we thought the Partisans who were Communist fighters fought for 50 years ago in the west of Europa, but fact is Partisan is be changed Parthian.
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    • They could defeat thed Greece's army.The interesting thing in this story is that we thought the Partisans who were Communist fighters fought for 50 years ago in the west of Europa, but the fact is that the name of Partisan is bewas changed to Parthian.
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    • They could have defeated Greece's army. The interesting thing in this story is that we thought the Partisans, who were Communist fighters, fought for 50ifty years ago in the west of Europae, but the fact is that the name, Partisan is be, was changed to Parthian.
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