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  • Dinner for Two

    • A romantic dinner at home is a good idea because there are a lot of fantastic recipes.
  • You can cook the dinner and set up the table together, why not?
    • Even if you fail, you can order a pizza and, then, have an interesting discussion by candlelight.
  • What can be better?
    • But, in truth, I'd prefer to look back to my childhood and go to an amusement park or to a water park with my soul mate.
  • I could go to a shooting range and finally end up having dinner at a restaurant.
    • I don't like staying at home as it so boring.
    • Some people, like my mother, prefer to stay at home in the evenings and watch TV for hours.
    • Whereas, I think that everybody needs a change a scenery from time to time.
    • Otherwise,they risk accumulating fatigue.

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