添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

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    • The place where I want to go now

    • I want to describe place where I want to go now.
    • It is my hometown names Orenburg.
    • I have been live there for 9 years.
    • And now, when I studying at Moscow University, I miss my home very much.
  • Orenburg is a small town with simple architecture and really beautiful nature.
    • Every summer the streets decorates with huge amount of alive flowers.
  • The town becomes fantastic!
    • It looks like the fairy-tale picture.
    • But the most wonderful time in Orenburg is winter.
    • In this time of year all my town covered by huge layer of snow and you can see Christmas Tree everywhere! oooh....
    • I really homeseak.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English