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    • I saw into the wild film yesterday and at first I didn´t know that those was a real story based in christopher´s life.I can´t understand what happened in your mind to take that decision I think that he was unhappy because of family rows and I suposse that since he was young he owned a free spirit so that house arguments was a "excuse" to relize him great dream living in the wild without anything or pretty anything that could be usefull to survive this record is shocking and it show us the wilder side of human being to achieve the happiness and one thing that kiked me of film was in the final scene he realized that the real happiness come when it is sharing.in memory of christopher mcanless!

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    • I saw into the wild film yesterday and at first I didn´t know that those was a real story based in christopher´s life.I can´t understand what happened in your mind to take that decision I think that he was unhappy because of family rows and I suposse that since he was young he owned a free spirit so that house arguments was a "excuse" to relize him great dream living in the wild without anything or pretty anything that could be usefull to survive this record is shocking and it show us the wilder side of human being to achieve the happiness and one thing that kiked me of film was in the final scene he realized that the real happiness come when it is sharing.in memory of christopher mcanless!
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