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Hero
- I am hero!
- I need a full set of robots and factory for them!
And I want to own a unique robot!
- Design for him the developers of Real WarBots will help me to create!

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- I am hero!
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- I am a hero!
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- I need a full set of robots and factory for them!
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Sentence 3
- And I want to own a unique robot!
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Sentence 4
- Design for him the developers of Real WarBots will help me to create!
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- ~~Design for him~~For its design the developers of Real WarBots will help me ~~to create!~~.
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