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    • My reflection about Australia as student

    • Hello everyone :) This is Basil originally I am from KSA which is stand for Kingdom of Saudi Arabia.
    • I came to South Australia to complete my education as a bachelor of business administration hopping the graduation at the end of 2017.
    • To be Honest with you Guys to me Australia like my second country because I reach to the point I feel homesick if I stay away from this country.
    • So let's talk a little bet in details about south Australia because I am from Adelaide exactly the way that people treat with each other it is totally respectful way it doesn't matter what is your skin colour or what is your ideology they gonna respect your religion because as far as I know I think this is the way these people how they have been learned since when they were at primary school they learned it and they grown with it and I like it so much .
    • Guys right now I am typing to you while I am laid on my bed so right now I think I want to sleep deeply because my eyes about to close automatically.
    • That is what I have in my mind I hope it won't take long when you read what I just write hopefully I will find professor to make proof reading and I would appreciate it from my heart Kind regard Basil From South Australia

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    • I came to South Australia to complete my education as a bachelor of business administration hopping the graduation at the end of 2017.
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    • I came to South Australia to complete my education as ain bachelor of business administration hopping for the graduation at the end of 2017.
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    • To be Honest with you Guys to me Australia like my second country because I reach to the point I feel homesick if I stay away from this country.
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    • To be Honest with you Guys to me Australia is like my second country because I reached to thea point where I feel homesick if I stay away from this country.
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    • So let's talk a little bet in details about south Australia because I am from Adelaide exactly the way that people treat with each other it is totally respectful way it doesn't matter what is your skin colour or what is your ideology they gonna respect your religion because as far as I know I think this is the way these people how they have been learned since when they were at primary school they learned it and they grown with it and I like it so much .
      투표하세요!
    • So let's talk a little beit in details about south Australia because I am from Adelaide exactly t. The way thate people treat with each other it is totally in a respectful way i. It doesn't matter what is your skin colour or what is your ideology they gonnaare going to respect your religion because as far as I know I think this is the way these people how they have been learnedtaught since when they were at primary school t. They learnedt it and they grownew with it and I like it so much .
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    • Guys right now I am typing to you while I am laid on my bed so right now I think I want to sleep deeply because my eyes about to close automatically.
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    • Guys right now I am typing to you while I am laidying on my bed s. So right now I think I want to sleep deeply because my eyes are about to close automatically.
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    • That is what I have in my mind I hope it won't take long when you read what I just write hopefully I will find professor to make proof reading and I would appreciate it from my heart Kind regard Basil From South Australia
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    • That is what I have in my mind. I hope it won't take long when you read what I just wriote h. Hopefully I will find a professor to make proof of reading and I would appreciate it from my heart.

      Kind regard
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      Basil ¶
      From South Australia ¶
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