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  • Educational Problems

    • I've just read an article about current issues in the education in my country.
    • There are some problems, firstly, teachers have low social status and poor teacher quality.
  • There are, of course, excellent teachers, but not too many.
  • In addition to this, the schools are mostly overcrowded.
    • As a result, many parents who wish their children obtain a decent education have to spend extra money for education.
  • Finally, educational programs in our schools are too outdated.
  • I hope that the new reform will improve the educational system and make it more functional because we need new high-quality specialists and educated people.
    • In addition, educational level is very important because it influences public morality.

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