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    • Jury of Music Competition

    • 1st judge (woman with red lips): Sofia, you know, I already know how to listen to myself, that's when I like someone, that's where my intuition, I like a gopher, you know, straighten up immediately and listen and listen.
    • I really liked the performance, I've even got goose bumps, you have everything, you have a whole arsenal of colors already, you do not look like kindergarten, even though you only 15 years old.
    • It now remains to find some sort of the own highlight, your own way to sound, find yourself, well, you've had enough competitions, be contestant, now is the time to individual artist to be born, thank you for your statement.
    • 2nd judge (the man with glasses): You certainly very gifted person, advanced for your age.
    • There is one danger only here, always in such cases, when a person in his 15 years already is so grounded, is so armed with fully and comprehensively, so he does become a competitive machine that is specifically designed to win competitions year after year but can not make the audience love her.
    • 3rd judge (the guy with the beard): 15, 14, 16 years ... it's the most difficult competitors, because they are really still children, and sing childish, and it is difficult to evaluate for me.
    • But you are do not sing like child, and not look childish.
  • Everything is so cool that I really think you have all the chances to become a star, and I just hope that you will shine for a long time.
    • 4th judge (the man in the cap New York Yankees) Sofia, all these gently and clean, and somehow neatly and touching.
  • I will tell you - yes.
  • 1st judge again (woman with red lips): Sofia, I very much hope that the "X-Factor" will be the last step for you, after which you will be able to find yourself.
  • I tell you - yes.
  • 3rd judge again (the guy with the beard): I say without doubt - Yes.
  • And 2nd judge (the man with glasses): I hope that we as mentors, will be able to show you the vector, in what direction you need to develop yourself, what road for you will lead you to your Olympus of singing (peak of mastery).
  • I tell you - yes.
  • Judges talk to each other: -She do looks very beautiful in fact, neat...
    • -Yes, very beautiful, and she did pick not a trivial song.
    • -No Wonder she won first place in the "new wave" and second in "Euro-vision".
  • Sofia herself only says: Thanks, Thanks and Thank you very much.

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  • 문장 1
    • 1st judge (woman with red lips): Sofia, you know, I already know how to listen to myself, that's when I like someone, that's where my intuition, I like a gopher, you know, straighten up immediately and listen and listen.
      투표하세요!
    • 1st judge (woman with red lips):¶
      Sofia, you know, I already know how to listen to myself, that's when I like someone, that's where my intuition
      is, I like a gopher, you know, straighten up immediately and listen and listen.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
  • 문장 2
    • I really liked the performance, I've even got goose bumps, you have everything, you have a whole arsenal of colors already, you do not look like kindergarten, even though you only 15 years old.
      투표하세요!
    • I really liked the performance, I've even got goose bumps, you have everything, you have a whole arsenal of colors already, you do not look like kindergarten student, even though you are only 15 years old.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
  • 문장 3
    • It now remains to find some sort of the own highlight, your own way to sound, find yourself, well, you've had enough competitions, be contestant, now is the time to individual artist to be born, thank you for your statement.
      투표하세요!
    • It now remains to findbe found out some sort of theyour own highlight, your own way to sound, find yourself, well, you've had enough competitions, be a contestant, now is the time tofor an individual artist to be born, thank you for your statement.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
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  • 문장 5
    • There is one danger only here, always in such cases, when a person in his 15 years already is so grounded, is so armed with fully and comprehensively, so he does become a competitive machine that is specifically designed to win competitions year after year but can not make the audience love her.
      투표하세요!
    • There is only one danger only here, always in such cases, when a person in his 15 years already is so grounded, is so armed with fully and comprehensively, s.So he does become a competitive machine that is specifically designed to win competitions year after year but that can not make the audience love him/her.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
  • 문장 6
    • 3rd judge (the guy with the beard): 15, 14, 16 years ... it's the most difficult competitors, because they are really still children, and sing childish, and it is difficult to evaluate for me.
      투표하세요!
    • 3rd judge (the guy with the beard):¶
      15, 14, 16 years ...
      it'sthese are the most difficult competitors, because they are really still children, and sing childishly, and it is difficult for me to evaluate for me.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
  • 문장 7
  • 문장 8
    • Everything is so cool that I really think you have all the chances to become a star, and I just hope that you will shine for a long time.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8
  • 문장 9
    • 4th judge (the man in the cap New York Yankees) Sofia, all these gently and clean, and somehow neatly and touching.
      투표하세요!
    • 4th judge (the man in the cap of New York Yankees)¶
      Sofia, all these
      are gentlye and clean, and somehow neatly and touching.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9
  • 문장 10
  • 문장 11
    • 1st judge again (woman with red lips): Sofia, I very much hope that the "X-Factor" will be the last step for you, after which you will be able to find yourself.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 11
  • 문장 12
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  • 문장 14
    • And 2nd judge (the man with glasses): I hope that we as mentors, will be able to show you the vector, in what direction you need to develop yourself, what road for you will lead you to your Olympus of singing (peak of mastery).
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 14
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