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  • A little bit of my thoughts!

    • I would not mind to go through again the day met with the people who opened for me the world from an other side!
    • It is a pity that many go out of your life....without words.
    • And how well that come new ones that fill your life with new colors, emotions, experiences, share their knowledge and can help with advice.
    • We need to expand your social circle, because every person who comes into your life, is not accidental, he is changing it, changes you for the better!

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    • I would not mind to go through again the day met with the people who opened for me the world from an other side!
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    • I would not mind to go through again the day again because I met with the people who opened for me the world for me from an other side!
    • I would not mind to gogoing through again the day again because I met with the people who opened for me the world to me from an other side!
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    • And how well that come new ones that fill your life with new colors, emotions, experiences, share their knowledge and can help with advice.
      투표하세요!
    • And how wellsurprising that come new ones thatcome and fill your life with new colors, emotions, experiences, share their knowledge and can help with advice.
    • And how welonderful that come new ones thatcome who fill your life with new colors, emotions, experiences, share their knowledge, and can help withoffer advice.
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    • We need to expand your social circle, because every person who comes into your life, is not accidental, he is changing it, changes you for the better!
      투표하세요!
    • We need to expand your social circle, because every person who comes into your life, is not accidental, he is changing it, changesing you for the better! ¶
    • We need to expand your social circle, because every person who comes into your life, is not accidental, he is; they are changing it, and it changes you for the better! ¶
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