添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

Ocelotkaからのテキスト - English

  • Sunday.

  • Today was a nice day.
    • I with my friends went to the cinema.The movie which we have seen was amazing!
    • After that we decided to go to the cafe where i ordered a cheesecake which tastes very nice.
    • When i came home i felt that i'm hungry, so i have cooked a curry and now i with my family are playing boardgames and eating my curry ^^

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English