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AIDER A CORRIGER MAINTENANT !Corrigé

Rédigé par shanaellea - English

  • Conversation

    • Hi, I'm preparing an oral for my final exam in english.
    • It will be a dialogue with two other girls, I've written only my sentences, so in order to separate each of my riposte, I'll put a / so that you can have a better understanding.
    • PS : "city" is for the name of the city I'm talking about, I didn't want to put the real name.
  • :) Thank you for everything guys :) Hello / Hello Vittoria, it’s me Sharon.
  • Councillor of « city », how are you ?
    • / I’m okay thanks.
  • Do you know that « city » has just been allocated £1 million lottery grant ?
    • / Yeah I tell you.
  • I’d like us to talk about it together.
    • Could we fix a time to meet ? / Definitely.
  • Shall we say 11 a.m?
  • / Wait, is Lili available right now ?
    • I’d like to invite her.
  • / Thank you! Hello, Lili ?
    • / It’s me, Saron how you do’ ?
    • / I call you because £1 million lottery grant has been allocated to « city ».
    • We’re going to meet with Vittoria on Thursday at 11 am, can you make it ?
  • / Sounds good to me.
    • I inform Vittoria of the change.
  • See you on Thursday.
    • / Thanks for coming at such notice.
  • Last week I announced you that Caerphilly has been allocated such a big amount of money.
    • As you can see, there is only one main item to discuss : what can we do for the town with £1 million ?
  • I’d like to hear your views on this ?
    • / Yeah Lili's right… / Humm yeah, that’s not exactly what I was thinking about but as you’re speaking about history.
    • / I have thought about an historical project, which will help the inhabitants to remember their history and at the same time to increase the tourism ; because I think these are two important points. / Sure.
  • The idea is to build a monument, something really big, something enormous.
    • It will be like a musuem recounting « city »’s story.
    • Whether it be historical, artistical, political every important moment of « city » has to be in this place.
    • / More precisely, a wing of the castle will be reserved for the « city’s » cheese, its history, a liitle cheesemaking room, and a place to buy the cheese, and other for the biggest personalities of « city », pictures of the celebration of the twinning etc. / « city’s » Castle could be the solution (right) !
    • You have said it was of ruin.
  • Let’s destroy it ! What’s wrong ?
    • I’m convinced it needs to be refreshed.
    • We destroy it so that I have the place to build my museum and we could even do your garden.
  • It is such an excellent idea.
    • Furthermore, « city’s » castle is perfect for this project, it is very big and people loves to have a look around.
  • / And as far as I’m concerned, I’m sure they would love to be able to go there for a stroll when the sun shines. Great !
  • I love the idea.
  • Shall we call it a day ?
    • Okey, I’ll sum up the main points and send you a mail first thing this afternoon. Alright !?

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