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My new friend
Hello everyone once again !
I started my studies in a academy four days ago .
In this academy I knew a beautiful girl called Maria , she's Venezuelan and she is sixteen .
I don't know why a think about her all time , I hope a day we will be best friends . Wish me luck !

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- My new friend
  투표하세요!
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문장 1
- Hello everyone once again !
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I started my studies in a academy four days ago .
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- In this academy I knew a beautiful girl called Maria , she's Venezuelan and she is sixteen .
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- I don't know why a think about her all time , I hope a day we will be best friends . Wish me luck !
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4