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  • Letter to my friend about a difficult relationship

    • Hi Alberto, You probably remember this girl who I spoke to you about, after I started to date her we ended up falling in love each other.
    • We have now been in a relationship for two years and to be honest I can’t imagine my life without her, I love her so much we have too many things in common.
    • For the last six months we have started to live together and we do almost everything together we have a membership to the same gym, we spend all our spare time together going to the restaurant, cinema, concert, theatre… Our relationship was perfect until I decided to go out on a week-end with some friends, I just wanted to see the NFL game in London which I watch every year… I mean there was nothing wrong with that it’s just a foot-ball game but she did not want me to go.
    • I did not want to get in conflict with her so I eventually gave in to her demand but I was very upset to miss this game.
    • The thing is after that she has kept on banning me from doing almost everything, she became extremely possessive with me.
    • I really love her she is very nice, elegant and intelligent.
    • I love being with her she is a really affectionate and gentle person.
  • However she is too possessive, jealous and even paranoid sometimes.
    • I tried to talk to her about her over-controlling behaviour but she don’t want to change at all, she told me that I have to choose between her and my friends even though I don’t see my friends a lot.
    • I don’t think I will be able to handle this situation still for a long time it’s like being in prison but I don’t want to lose her as well, so I really need your advice on this issue.
    • (thanks for the correction guys)

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    • We have now been in a relationship for two years and to be honest I can’t imagine my life without her, I love her so much we have too many things in common.
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    • We have now been in a relationship for two years and to be honest I can’t imagine my life without her, I love her so much, and we have too many things in common.
    • We have now been in a relationship for two years and to be honest I can’t imagine my life without her,. I love her so much w. We have too many things in common.
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    • For the last six months we have started to live together and we do almost everything together we have a membership to the same gym, we spend all our spare time together going to the restaurant, cinema, concert, theatre… Our relationship was perfect until I decided to go out on a week-end with some friends, I just wanted to see the NFL game in London which I watch every year… I mean there was nothing wrong with that it’s just a foot-ball game but she did not want me to go.
      Vote now!
    • For the last six months we have started to live together and we do almost everything together we have a membership to the same gym, we spend all our spare time together going to the. We train at the gym together, to restaurants, to the cinema, to concert,s, to the theatre…¶ ¶Our relationship was perfect until I decided to go out on a week-end with some friends, I just wanted to see the NFL game in London which I watch every year… I mean there was nothing wrong with that it’s just a foot-ball game but she did not want me to go.
    • For the last six months we have started to live together and we do almost everything together w. We have a membership tof the the same gym, we spend all our spare time together going to the restaurant, cinema, concert, theatrer…¶ ¶Our relationship was perfect until I decided to go out on a week-end with some friends, I just wanted to see the NFL game in London which I watch every year… I mean there was nothing wrong with that it’s just a foot-ball game but she did not want me to go.
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    • I tried to talk to her about her over-controlling behaviour but she don’t want to change at all, she told me that I have to choose between her and my friends even though I don’t see my friends a lot.
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    • I tried to talk to her about her over-controlling behaviour but she doesn’t want to change at all, she told me that I have to choose between her and my friends even though I don’t see my friends a lot.
    • I tried to talk to her about her over-controlling behaviour but she don’idn't want to change at all, s. She told me that I have to choose between her and my friends even though I don’t see my friends a lot.
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    • I don’t think I will be able to handle this situation still for a long time it’s like being in prison but I don’t want to lose her as well, so I really need your advice on this issue.
      Vote now!
    • I don’t think I will be able to handle this situation still f. For a long time it’sI feel like being in a prison but I don’t want to lose her as well, so I really need your advice on this issue.
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