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    • In my career choice can influence a lot of things , the working market , the salary and even if all these things are well maybe I won't like that job because , for example , I don't like traveling a lot .
    • I chose this career because I like the video games however my parents and my aunt think that it isn't a good choice .
    • I like math , chemistry and physics and I want to work in video game development because it makes me happy and when I play video games I forget my problems and I escape from reality .

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    • In my career choice can influence a lot of things , the working market , the salary and even if all these things are well maybe I won't like that job because , for example , I don't like traveling a lot .
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    • In mMy career choice can be influenced by a lot of things , the working market , the salary and even if all these things are well maybe I won't like thate job because , for example , I don't like to traveling a lot .
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    • In my career choice can influence a lot of things , the working market , the salary and even if all these things are well maybe I won't like that job because , for example , I don't like travelling a lot .
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    • I chose this career because I like the video games however my parents and my aunt think that it isn't a good choice .
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    • I chose this career because I like theo play video games h. However my parents and my aunt think that it isn't a good choice .
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    • I like math , chemistry and physics and I want to work in video game development because it makes me happy and when I play video games I forget my problems and I escape from reality .
      투표하세요!
    • I like mathematics , chemistry and physics and I want to work in video -game development area because it makes me happy and when I play video -games I forget my problems and I escape from the reality .
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