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POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ TERAZ!Poprawiono

Text from HananHero - English

  • A weird creature in my house .. (correct me please)

    • Yesterday, our teacher asked us to tell real stories that happened with us.
    • My classmate told a very weird one, she started the story by saying: "One night, when I was 7 years old, my father was away from home, so my mother told me and my sister that we can sleep in my parents' room.
    • My sister and I were lying on small mattresses on the floor, talking and joking all night.
  • The room's door was open, and the outer rooms' lights were off, but the light coming from our room could lighten the place.
  • I was staring at the living room which I could see from my place.
    • Suddenly, I saw something weird there, something I've never seen like before.
    • I saw three men standing in front of a baby walker my brother had back then, they were standing beside each other.
  • They were nearly 8-9 feet tall.
  • Their skin was shiny and extremely dark-black in color, it was like if they were dyed with petrol.
  • They were naked, featureless, and skinny.
  • They didn't make a single sound.
  • The two men on the sides didn't move at all, but the one in the middle did.
    • He raised his right knee then pulled it down.
  • He kept doing this over and over again.
  • The sight was terrifying, and the surprise is that it wasn't only me who saw it, my sister was watching as well, so we called out our mom crying, and when she came to check, nothing was there."

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English