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    • Hello everyone, I'm a student from Perú and I have a task from the university, I have to write about one of the most important museum in my city (the Real Felipe Fortress), but everything should be in english.
    • I've been write it but I'm a begineer so, Could you help me to correct this first part,please?: The Real Felipe fortress was the most important fortress in America.
    • It was built from Spain, in 1747 the viceroy "José antonio Manso de Velasco" (that's the viceroy's name) started the construction and the Viceroy "Manuel de Amat y Juniet" finished it in 1774; the area is 70000 square meters, the perimeter is 1580 meters and the form of the fortress is a pentagon each corner is call "bastion", the walls was made with rocks from San Lorenzo island and the material to blinded the rocks is "CALICANTO" and that is a mixture of water, sand, cal.
    • the first bastion is the artillery park,in there you can see 3 models of cannons: Swedish, French and Japanise.
    • And thoose models of canos were used by Perú in 1941in the war with Ecuador.
    • That is the first par , as soon as posibleI I'll writing the others parts.
    • Thank you for yout help.

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    • Hello everyone, I'm a student from Perú and I have a task from the university, I have to write about one of the most important museum in my city (the Real Felipe Fortress), but everything should be in english.
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    • Hello everyone, I'm a student from Perúu and I have a task from the university,. I have to write about one of the most important museum in my city (the Real Felipe Fortress), but everything should be in english.
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    • I've been write it but I'm a begineer so, Could you help me to correct this first part,please?: The Real Felipe fortress was the most important fortress in America.
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    • I've been writeing it but I'm a beginener so,, So Could you help me to correct this first part,please?:¶The Real Felipe fortress was the most important fortress in America.
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    • It was built from Spain, in 1747 the viceroy "José antonio Manso de Velasco" (that's the viceroy's name) started the construction and the Viceroy "Manuel de Amat y Juniet" finished it in 1774; the area is 70000 square meters, the perimeter is 1580 meters and the form of the fortress is a pentagon each corner is call "bastion", the walls was made with rocks from San Lorenzo island and the material to blinded the rocks is "CALICANTO" and that is a mixture of water, sand, cal.
      투표하세요!
    • It was built fromin Spain, in 1747 the viceroy "José antonio Manso de Velasco" (that's the viceroy's name) started the construction and the Viceroy "Manuel de Amat y Juniet" finished it in 1774; the area is 70000 square meters, the perimeter is 1580 meters and the form of the fortress is a pentagon e. Each corner is called "bastion", the walls wasere made with rocks from San Lorenzo island and the material to blinded the rocks is "CALICANTO" and that is a mixture of water, sand, cal and calcium.
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    • the first bastion is the artillery park,in there you can see 3 models of cannons: Swedish, French and Japanise.
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    • ¶tThe first bastion is the artillery park,in t. There you can see 3 models of cannons: Swedish, French and Japaniese.
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